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“I have a real problem with bloat -- I write like fat ladies diet.” quote by Stephen King
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““I have a real problem with bloat -- I write like fat ladies diet.””

Stephen King

About This Quote

The speaker humorously criticizes excessive wordiness, likening it to a diet for overweight women, implying a need for leaner prose.

In simple terms: Too many words make writing bloated.

Key Takeaway

Concise writing is preferable to verbose expression.

Themes

writing style brevity

Mood

wry critical

Type

author's self‑critique writing advice

When to use this quote

  • drafting a novel
  • writing marketing copy
  • creating academic papers

Key Concepts

editing discipline communication efficiency

Practical Applications

  • Apply a rule: cut any word that doesn’t add new information.

Questions to Reflect On

  • What criteria do you use to decide if a sentence is essential?
  • How can you maintain voice while trimming excess?
A Different Perspective

The metaphor may be offensive or dismissive of body‑positive language.

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