Adjectives Quote by William Zinsser
“Not every oak has to be gnarled, every detective hard-bitten. The adjective that exists solely as a decoration is a self-indulgence for the writer and an obstacle for the reader.”
About This Quote
Source Book: Elements of Style, William Zinsser, 1970
Writers should avoid decorative adjectives that add no meaning, as they distract readers and indulge the writer.
In simple terms: Avoid unnecessary adjectives.
Key Takeaway
Use precise language.
Themes
writing
clarity
style
Mood
reflective
critical
Type
advice
instructional
When to use this quote
- editing drafts
- teaching writing
- proofreading
- author workshops
Key Concepts
precision
self‑indulgence
reader focus
Questions to Reflect On
- Which adjectives in your work serve meaning?
- How does excess description affect reader engagement?
A Different Perspective
Over‑editing can strip voice.
