Caught Quote by Patrick Rothfuss
“I think the tendency to over-explain and over describe is one of the most common failings in fantasy. It's an unfortunate piece of Tolkien's legacy. Don't get me wrong, Tolkien was a great worldbuilder, but he got a little caught up describing his world at times, at the expense of the overall story.”
About This Quote
Source Interview: The Writer's Journey, 2015
Over‑explanation in fantasy can drown narrative, sacrificing plot for detail.
In simple terms: Too much detail harms story.
Balance world‑building with plot.
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When to use this quote
- novel drafting
- editing
- workshop feedback
Key Concepts
Questions to Reflect On
- How can you trim description without losing immersion?
- When does detail enhance rather than hinder?