Action Quote by George R. R. Martin
“I don't like the strictly objective viewpoint [in which all of the characters' actions are described in the third person, but we never hear what any of them are thinking.] Which is much more of a cinematic technique. Something written in third person objective is what the camera sees. Because unless you're doing a voiceover, which is tremendously clumsy, you can't hear the ideas of characters. For that, we depend on subtle clues that the directors put in and that the actors supply. I can actually write, "'Yes you can trust me,' he lied." [But it's better to get inside the characters' heads.]”
About This Quote
Source Interview: Discussion on narrative perspective, George R. R. Martin, 2018
The quote argues that third‑person objective narration limits access to characters’ thoughts, making storytelling rely on visual and performance cues rather than internal monologue.
In simple terms: Third‑person objective hides characters’ thoughts, needing visual clues.
Use narrative techniques that reveal inner thoughts directly.
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When to use this quote
- film analysis
- novel writing
- screenplay drafting
- acting workshops
Key Concepts
Questions to Reflect On
- How can a writer balance external action with internal insight?
- What techniques convey a character’s mind without voiceover?
Relying solely on visual cues can miss subtle internal motivations.