Adjectives Quote by Anne Bernays
“Nice writing isn't enough. It isn't enough to have smooth and pretty language. You have to surprise the reader frequently, you can't just be nice all the time. Provoke the reader. Astonish the reader. Writing that has no surprises is as bland as oatmeal. Surprise the reader with the unexpected verb or adjective. Use one startling adjective per page.”
About This Quote
Source Essay: Writing Advice, date unknown
Effective writing requires surprise; merely smooth language is insufficient to engage readers.
In simple terms: Good writing must surprise, not just be pretty.
Key Takeaway
Add unexpected language choices.
Themes
writing
creativity
engagement
Mood
inspirational
challenging
Type
advice
instructional
When to use this quote
- novel writing
- marketing copy
- blog posts
Key Concepts
surprise technique
stylistic devices
Questions to Reflect On
- What surprise will enhance your point?
- When is restraint better than surprise?
A Different Perspective
Overusing surprises may distract from clarity.
