Put your vocabulary on the top shelf of your toolbox, and…
““Put your vocabulary on the top shelf of your toolbox, and don't make any conscious effort to improve it... One of the really bad things you can do to your writing is to dress up the vocabulary, looking for long words because you're maybe a little bit ashamed of your shot ones. This is like dressing up a household pet in evening clothes. The pet is embarrassed and the person who committed this act of pre-meditated cuteness should be even more embarrassed. Make yourself a solemn promise right now that you'll never use 'emolument' when you mean 'tip' and you'll never say 'John stopped long enough to perform an act of excretion' when you mean 'John stopped long enough to take a shit'. If you believe 'take a shit' would be considered offensive or inappropriate by your audience, feel free to say 'John stopped long enough to move his bowels'...””
About This Quote
This interpretation was drafted with AI assistance. It is one reading of the quote, not the author's own explanation.
Overly complex vocabulary can alienate readers; simplicity conveys ideas more clearly and authentically.
In simple terms: Use plain language; avoid pretentious words.
Key Takeaway
Choose clarity over showy diction.
Themes
writing
clarity
authenticity
Mood
reflective
educational
Type
advice
instructional
When to use this quote
- editing
- public speaking
- teaching
- creative writing
Key Concepts
linguistics
communication
style
Questions to Reflect On
- How does word choice affect reader trust?
- When is technical jargon appropriate?
A Different Perspective
Complex words may seem impressive but can obscure meaning.