I am a wordy writer, and often churn out pages on end…
““I am a wordy writer, and often churn out pages on end without advancing the plot a jot. Hence I try to take my cue from a childhood impatience with any device that doesn't get somewhere. Even in his sprightly youth, Clippity had a problem with running in place—just like my first drafts—when the surface was too slick. As a kid, I was ingenious enough to smear green Plasticine on his rear hooves. Thus I discovered the importance of traction, as handy a concept in literature as for wind-up toys.””
About This Quote
This interpretation was drafted with AI assistance. It is one reading of the quote, not the author's own explanation.
The author compares her early drafts to a toy lacking traction, emphasizing the need for forward momentum in storytelling.
In simple terms: Writing needs traction to move forward.
Focus on plot progression.
Themes
Mood
Type
When to use this quote
- writing workshop
- editorial feedback
- self‑editing
Key Concepts
Questions to Reflect On
- How do you maintain momentum in long projects?
- What tools help you avoid “running in place”?
Metaphor may not apply to all writers.