Writing Quote by Sten Nadolny
““On Sunday, May 23rd, 1819, all of our people embarked..." "Our people?" But they went on board themselves, not just some other people that belong to them. So he'd better say "travelling party". No, "the men under my command". But that was also wrong, since the phrase didn't include him, and he had installed himself on the Prince of Wales at the same time. "I and the men" pleased him as little as "the men and I". "We embarked in full number" was inaccurate; the "entire party including my own person" discouraged reading. "On Sunday, May 23rd, 1819, our entire party led by me embarked..." - Well, now what?””
About This Quote
Source Speech: Historical Reenactment Narrative, 2020
The speaker critiques and wording of a historical account, emphasizing precise self‑identification and collective description.
In simple terms: Choosing accurate language matters when describing group actions.
Key Takeaway
Use precise phrasing to reflect true participation.
Themes
communication
history
precision
Mood
reflective
analytical
Type
explanatory
critical
When to use this quote
- historical speeches
- military reports
- team presentations
- academic writing
Key Concepts
narrative framing
self‑representation
Questions to Reflect On
- How does wording affect perception of authority?
- When is precision more important than readability?
A Different Perspective
Over‑emphasis on exact phrasing can hinder narrative flow.
