Amount Quote by Sarah Waters
“Cut like crazy. Less is more. I've often read manuscripts - including my own - where I've got to the beginning of, say, chapter two and have thought: “This is where the novel should actually start.” A huge amount of information about character and backstory can be conveyed through small detail. The emotional attachment you feel to a scene or a chapter will fade as you move on to other stories. Be business-like about it.”
About This Quote
Excessive exposition can stall a story; concise detail and early action engage readers more effectively.
In simple terms: Too much detail slows narrative; start strong.
Trim unnecessary backstory and begin with compelling action.
Themes
Mood
Type
When to use this quote
- novel drafting
- short story writing
- script development
Key Concepts
Questions to Reflect On
- Which scenes can be shown instead of told?
- How does pacing affect reader engagement?
Risk of losing depth if overly trimmed.