Bunch Quote by Mary J. Miller
“I've learned a lot about language from reading slush. You can immediately tell if a writer is in control of the narrative. This writer will avoid using too many words like "possibly," "probably," "maybe," "perhaps," etc. He/she will avoid using clichés, as well as a lot of metaphors, and won't take four sentences to say what they could in one (or write a great sentence and follow it up with a bunch of stuff that just weakens it).”
About This Quote
Source Article: Writing craft column, 2020
Effective writing avoids filler, clichés, and over‑complicated sentences, focusing on clarity and control.
In simple terms: Good writing is clear, concise, and controlled.
Key Takeaway
Eliminate unnecessary words.
Themes
writing
clarity
style
communication
Mood
reflective
instructive
Type
educational
practical
When to use this quote
- draft revisions
- peer feedback
- editing workshops
- self‑editing
Key Concepts
conciseness
voice
editing techniques
Questions to Reflect On
- Which words do you often overuse?
- How can you keep your voice while being concise?
A Different Perspective
Over‑editing can strip personality from prose.
