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“Description needs to slide into a story like a snake through grass - silently, almost invisibly, without calling attention to itself. It should enrich every story moment without slowing the action.” quote by Marion Dane Bauer
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“Description needs to slide into a story like a snake through grass - silently, almost invisibly, without calling attention to itself. It should enrich every story moment without slowing the action.”

Marion Dane Bauer

About This Quote

Source Writing Guide: The Art of Storytelling, 2001

Description should weave subtly into narrative, enhancing without distracting, like a hidden snake.

In simple terms: Blend description seamlessly.

Key Takeaway

Integrate details unobtrusively.

Themes

writing description storytelling

Mood

analytical creative

Type

instructional literary

When to use this quote

  • novel writing
  • screenplay
  • advertising
  • educational content

Key Concepts

narrative technique subtlety

Questions to Reflect On

  • How can you make details invisible?
  • When does description become a distraction?
A Different Perspective

Over‑description can stall pacing.

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