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Comanche Quote by Lori Handeland

“The sun glanced off a long, wicked looking knife in the Comanche's grip. At least Cash wouldn't have long to mourn. The other Indians held similar weapons, but they hung back as their leader knelt next to Sullivan. He muttered something, low and guttural, a single syllable that sounded like an…” quote by Lori Handeland
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““The sun glanced off a long, wicked looking knife in the Comanche's grip. At least Cash wouldn't have long to mourn. The other Indians held similar weapons, but they hung back as their leader knelt next to Sullivan. He muttered something, low and guttural, a single syllable that sounded like an insult, then picked up a lock of Sullivan's hair. The knife descended toward his scalp. "No!" Reese shouted. "Me." The Comanche paused and stared at him with a spark of interest, almost admiration. But that couldn't be since the Indian had no idea what Reese was saying. He continued to try anyway. "Me first." He struggled, wishing he could use his hands to point at himself. "Shut the hell up, Reese," Sullivan said. "What possible difference does it make who they kill first?" "Who knows what might happen. While they're working on me, anyone could show up and save the rest of you." "In that case, me first," Cash drawled. "Me." "No. Yo primero!" "Kid, I'm the only one without a wife and far too many children. No one would miss me." "I would." The words were punctuated by the distinct sound of a rifle being cocked. All eyes turned toward the man who had appeared at the edge of the clearing. Cash's sigh of relief was in direct contrast to the sneer in his voice. "About damn time, Rev. We've been waitin' on you.””

Lori Handeland

About This Quote

A tense standoff where characters negotiate who will die first, revealing self‑preservation, sacrifice, and the absurdity of hierarchy in life‑or‑death moments.

In simple terms: Survival instincts clash with forced heroism.

Key Takeaway

Self‑interest often outweighs altruism under pressure.

Themes

survival self‑preservation sacrifice hierarchy absurdity morality

Mood

tense darkly humorous

Type

dialogue narrative excerpt

When to use this quote

  • combat scenario
  • life‑or‑death decision
  • group leadership crisis

Key Concepts

power dynamics human value group cohesion risk assessment

Practical Applications

  • character development
  • tension building

Questions to Reflect On

  • What does it reveal about a character when they volunteer for death?
  • How does the negotiation of who dies first affect group morale?
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