Clause Quote by Janet Fitch
“A dependent clause (a sentence fragment set off by commas, dontcha know) helps you explore your story by moving you deeper into the sentence. It allows you to stop and think harder about what you've already written. Often the story you're looking for is inside the sentence. The dependent clause helps you uncover it.”
About This Quote
Source Book: Writing Fiction: A Guide to Narrative Craft, 2005
Dependent clauses let writers pause, reflect, and dig deeper into their narrative, revealing hidden story elements within a sentence.
In simple terms: Use clauses to explore deeper story layers.
Pause, reflect, and uncover hidden story.
Themes
Mood
Type
When to use this quote
- drafting
- editing
- creative brainstorming
- character development
Key Concepts
Questions to Reflect On
- How can you balance pause with momentum?
- When does a clause add value versus clutter?
Relying too much on clauses can disrupt flow if overused.