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Clause Quote by Janet Fitch

“A dependent clause (a sentence fragment set off by commas, dontcha know) helps you explore your story by moving you deeper into the sentence. It allows you to stop and think harder about what you've already written. Often the story you're looking for is inside the sentence. The dependent clause…” quote by Janet Fitch
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“A dependent clause (a sentence fragment set off by commas, dontcha know) helps you explore your story by moving you deeper into the sentence. It allows you to stop and think harder about what you've already written. Often the story you're looking for is inside the sentence. The dependent clause helps you uncover it.”

Janet Fitch

About This Quote

Source Book: Writing Fiction: A Guide to Narrative Craft, 2005

Dependent clauses let writers pause, reflect, and dig deeper into their narrative, revealing hidden story elements within a sentence.

In simple terms: Use clauses to explore deeper story layers.

Key Takeaway

Pause, reflect, and uncover hidden story.

Themes

writing reflection storytelling

Mood

thoughtful analytical

Type

instructional insightful

When to use this quote

  • drafting
  • editing
  • creative brainstorming
  • character development

Key Concepts

Narrative structure depth clarity

Questions to Reflect On

  • How can you balance pause with momentum?
  • When does a clause add value versus clutter?
A Different Perspective

Relying too much on clauses can disrupt flow if overused.

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