Bad writing Quote by Ernest Hemingway
““This too to remember. If a man writes clearly enough any one can see if he fakes. If he mystifies to avoid a straight statement, which is very different from breaking so-called rules of syntax or grammar to make an efffect which can be obtained in no other way, the writer takes a longer time to be known as a fake and other writers who are afflicted by the same necessity will praise him in their own defense. True mysticism should not be confused with incompetence in writing which seeks to mystify where there is no mystery but is really only the necessity to fake to cover lack of knowledge or the inability to state clearly. Mysticism implies a mystery and there are many mysteries; but incompetence is not one of them; nor is overwritten journalism made literature by the injection of a false epic qulaity. Remember this too: all bad writers are in love with the epic.””
About This Quote
Source Essay: The Art of Writing, 1930s
True mysticism in writing is distinct from deliberate obfuscation; genuine mystery invites wonder, while fake complexity hides ignorance.
In simple terms: Real mystery inspires; fake complexity deceives.
Key Takeaway
Value clarity over pretentiousness.
Themes
writing
clarity
authenticity
mistakes
literature
Mood
contemplative
instructive
analytical
Type
educational
literary
When to use this quote
- editing
- teaching writing
- literary analysis
- author workshops
Key Concepts
mysticism
deception
literary criticism
Questions to Reflect On
- When does elaborate style become a cover for weak ideas?
- How can writers balance depth with accessibility?
A Different Perspective
Complex language can alienate readers and obscure truth.
