Breadth Quote by Dorianne Laux
“The more that accrues, the more depth, weight, and breadth we can bring to the poems, which we then need to throw overboard so we don't sink.”
About This Quote
Source Poetry Workshop Lecture, 2018
Accumulating material adds depth, but excess must be discarded to avoid being overwhelmed.
In simple terms: Add depth, then prune excess.
Key Takeaway
Balance richness with clarity.
Themes
creativity
editing
balance
Mood
reflective
thoughtful
Type
analytical
inspirational
When to use this quote
- writing drafts
- artistic revisions
- project management
Key Concepts
depth
weight
brevity
Questions to Reflect On
- When do you know to stop adding?
- How does pruning improve impact?
A Different Perspective
Too much editing can strip essential voice.
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