About Quote by Denise Mina
“In prose, leaps of logic can be made while the protagonist thinks about things and arrives at conclusions. Even with voiceover, there's no real way of having an inner voice without it taking over the entire story.”
About This Quote
Source Novel: The Long Drop by Denise Mina, 2017
Narrative voice can be fragmented, but an overt inner monologue can dominate and diminish story flow.
In simple terms: Too much inner voice can overwhelm plot.
Key Takeaway
Balance internal thought with external action.
Themes
narrative technique
voice
structure
balance
Mood
introspective
critical
Type
creative
educational
When to use this quote
- novel writing
- screenwriting
- creative workshops
Key Concepts
psychology of storytelling
character interiority
Questions to Reflect On
- When does inner dialogue enhance a story?
- How can a writer keep the protagonist’s thoughts subtle?
A Different Perspective
Overemphasis on inner voice may alienate readers.
