This is the plot up to the moment when the writer leaves…
““This is the plot up to the moment when the writer leaves the woman still dolefully enmeshed in it, and, suitcase in hand, tiptoeing so as not to disturb her postcoital rest, he himself slips silently out of the plot on the grounds of its general implausibility, a total lack of gravity, reliance at too many key points on unlikely coincidence, an absence of inner coherence, and not even the most tenuous evidence of anything resembling a serious meaning or purpose. The story so far is frivolously plotted, overplotted, for his taste altogether too freakishly plotted, with outlandish events so wildly careening around every corner that there is nowhere for intelligence to establish a foothold and develop a perspective. As if the look-alike at the story's storm center isn't farfetched enough, there is the capricious loss of the Smilesburger check (there is the fortuitous appearance of the Smilesburger check; there is Louis B. Smilesburger himself, Borscht Belt deus ex machina), which sets the action on its unconvincing course and serves to reinforce the writer's sense that the story has been intentionally conceived as a prank, and a nasty prank at that, considering the struggles of Jewish existence that are said to be at issue by his antagonist.””
About This Quote
This interpretation was drafted with AI assistance. It is one reading of the quote, not the author's own explanation.
The writer abandons a convoluted, implausible plot lacking coherence and purpose, exposing its frivolity and reliance on coincidences.
In simple terms: The story is overcomplicated and meaningless.
Simplify narratives and seek genuine meaning.
Themes
Mood
Type
When to use this quote
- novel writing
- literary analysis
- creative critique
- storytelling workshops
Key Concepts
Questions to Reflect On
- How can a writer balance complexity with plausibility?
- What makes a story feel purposeful?
Even a flawed plot can engage readers if handled skillfully.