Use no superfluous word, no adjective, which does not…
“Use no superfluous word, no adjective, which does not reveal something. Don't use such an expression as 'dim land of peace.' It dulls the image. It mixes an abstraction with the concrete. It comes from the writer's not realizing that the natural object is always the adequate symbol. Go in fear of abstraction.”
About This Quote
This interpretation was drafted with AI assistance. It is one reading of the quote, not the author's own explanation.
Avoid unnecessary adjectives; use concrete language that directly conveys meaning.
In simple terms: Use precise, concrete words.
Key Takeaway
Write clearly, avoid vague abstraction.
Themes
clarity
precision
writing style
Mood
thoughtful
analytical
Type
instructional
literary
When to use this quote
- editing
- creative writing
- teaching
- literary criticism
Key Concepts
symbolism
abstraction
concreteness
Questions to Reflect On
- How does concrete language affect reader imagination?
- When is abstraction useful?
A Different Perspective
Overly literal language can stifle imagination.