Affirmative action Quote by William Knowlton Zinsser
““And yet, on balance, affirmative action has, I think, been a qualified success.” A 13-word sentence with five hedging words. I give it first prize as the most wishy-washy sentence in modern public discourse,””
About This Quote
Source Speech: Public commentary, date unknown
The speaker labels a statement as overly cautious and indecisive, highlighting its lack of firm stance.
In simple terms: The sentence is seen as wishy‑washy.
Recognize and avoid vague language.
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When to use this quote
- political debate
- media analysis
- policy discussion
Key Concepts
Questions to Reflect On
- How does hedging affect trust?
- When is cautious language appropriate?
Such phrasing can undermine credibility and persuade audiences.