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Affirmative action Quote by William Knowlton Zinsser

“And yet, on balance, affirmative action has, I think, been a qualified success.” A 13-word sentence with five hedging words. I give it first prize as the most wishy-washy sentence in modern public discourse,” quote by William Knowlton Zinsser
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““And yet, on balance, affirmative action has, I think, been a qualified success.” A 13-word sentence with five hedging words. I give it first prize as the most wishy-washy sentence in modern public discourse,””

William Knowlton Zinsser

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Source Speech: Public commentary, date unknown

The speaker labels a statement as overly cautious and indecisive, highlighting its lack of firm stance.

In simple terms: The sentence is seen as wishy‑washy.

Key Takeaway

Recognize and avoid vague language.

Themes

communication politics clarity

Mood

skeptical critical

Type

analytical observational

When to use this quote

  • political debate
  • media analysis
  • policy discussion

Key Concepts

hedging qualifiers public discourse

Questions to Reflect On

  • How does hedging affect trust?
  • When is cautious language appropriate?
A Different Perspective

Such phrasing can undermine credibility and persuade audiences.

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