Books Quote by Shane Carruth
“When I started writing short stories, I thought I was writing a novel. I had like 60 or 70 pages. And what I realized was that I don't write inner monologue. I don't want to talk about what somebody is thinking or feeling. I wanted to try to show it in an interesting way. And so what I realized was that I was really writing a screenplay.”
About This Quote
Source Interview: Podcast with Shane Carruth, 2020
He realized his short stories lacked inner monologue and felt more like screenplays, focusing on showing rather than telling.
In simple terms: He switched from novel style to visual storytelling.
Embrace showing over telling.
Themes
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Type
When to use this quote
- short story writing
- screenplay development
- creative workshops
- editing sessions
Key Concepts
Questions to Reflect On
- How can you convey character thoughts without explicit monologue?
- When does showing become confusing?
Screenplays also need internal depth; balance showing with inner thought.