Descriptive-prose Quote by M.L. LeGette
““In the light from the rising moon, a miniature statue shimmered on a pedestal: a statue of a dragon, carved from an enormous emerald. He nearly tripped over his own feet in his haste to reach it. He stretched out his hands. His mouth went dry. A dazzling light flooded the room as a door swung open. Toad froze. His stomach dropped through the floor. His arms were still raised, inches from the statue, but his eyes were transfixed upon the giant figure standing in the doorway.””
About This Quote
Source Short story: The Emerald Dragon, M.L. LeGette, 2020
A character is mesmerized by a dazzling emerald dragon statue, experiencing awe and fear as a door opens.
In simple terms: A striking object triggers intense emotion and suspense.
Key Takeaway
Pay attention to sensory details that heighten tension.
Themes
fiction
fantasy
suspense
Mood
mysterious
tense
Type
narrative
descriptive
When to use this quote
- novel writing
- game design
- theatre staging
Key Concepts
symbolism
visual imagery
psychology
Questions to Reflect On
- What does the dragon symbolize?
- How does the setting influence the character’s reaction?
A Different Perspective
The vivid description may overwhelm readers without clear narrative purpose.
