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Closed door Quote by Kimberly Derting

“I just . . . I just wanted to make sure you were . . . okay.” He shoved away from the door as he took a long stride toward her, letting the door slam behind him. “I should be asking you the same thing,” he said, cringing, his voice filled with concern. Violet knew how she looked. The bruise on her…” quote by Kimberly Derting
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““I just . . . I just wanted to make sure you were . . . okay.” He shoved away from the door as he took a long stride toward her, letting the door slam behind him. “I should be asking you the same thing,” he said, cringing, his voice filled with concern. Violet knew how she looked. The bruise on her cheek had turned a strange combination of green, yellow, and purple. The swelling had gone down, but not enough for anyone else to notice. “I’m fine.” She hedged and then tried to shrug it off. “If you like bar-fight chic.” His face darkened. “I wasn’t really talking about what’s on the outside.” “You mean, like, it’s what’s on the inside that counts?” Rafe grimaced, the ghost of a smile finding his lips. “Well, when you put it that way, it sounds sort of . . .” “Sweet?” “I was gonna say lame. But, yeah, that works too.” “Yeah? Well, you look . . .” She was going to say better , but she practically stumbled over the word. He looked anything but better. If she looked beat-up, he looked downright thrashed. Even behind the bandages, Violet could see scrapes and mottled skin. “Terrible. You look terrible.” She moved closer to him on the landing as he unlocked the closed door. “But better than the last time I saw you, I guess.” Rafe tried to laugh, but winced and grabbed his ribs. “Damn, V, I wouldn’t plan on a career in nursing if I were you; your bedside manner stinks.” His eyes clouded over when he saw her stroking the black onyx hanging from around her neck. “Krystal?” he asked. “For protection,” Violet clarified. “Um, yeah, I got one too. Mine’s for healing.” He tugged at the silver chain around his neck. He held up an irregular-looking stone that had been tucked beneath his shirt. It was cloudy—opaque—and Violet wondered at the mystical qualities Krystal believed it possessed. “I meant it’s from Krystal. Right?” “Oh, yeah . . . right.” She nodded, realizing she’d misunderstood his question.””

Kimberly Derting

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About This Quote

Two battered characters exchange concern, revealing hidden wounds and a fragile bond formed through shared trauma and mutual care.

In simple terms: Vulnerability and uneasy intimacy.

Key Takeaway

Pain can foster connection.

Themes

vulnerability trust trauma healing dark humor misunderstanding

Mood

tension affection wry humor

Type

dialogue narrative excerpt character interaction

When to use this quote

  • after a fight
  • in a dim hallway
  • while tending wounds
  • when sharing personal items
  • during a tense reunion

Key Concepts

emotional masking physical injury protective talismans self‑deprecation

Practical Applications

  • character development
  • building relational tension

Questions to Reflect On

  • What does the exchange reveal about their coping mechanisms?
  • How does the contrast between external bruises and internal feelings shape their interaction?
A Different Perspective

The dialogue leans on melodrama, risking cliché if not grounded in deeper context.

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