Cole Quote by Brodi Ashton
““No you don't," he said. "The corpses can wait." I wasn't sure if he was referring to me or the screen. I would've asked him to clarify but, Jack's lips were suddenly very busy moving against Nikki's. I resisted the urge to dry-heave and looked up at the sky, the trees, the buses anywhere that wouldn't trigger the upchuck reflex. Jack needed to learn some manners. Damn epic love.””
About This Quote
Source Short Story: Unnamed Narrative, 2021
The narrator resists a chaotic, intimate encounter, focusing on sensory details to avoid nausea, while critiquing the other’s lack of decorum.
In simple terms: A tense, messy scene is described with vivid sensory focus.
Key Takeaway
Notice how sensory overload shapes perception.
Themes
intimacy
discomfort
social etiquette
sensory overload
Mood
raw
intense
Type
narrative
descriptive
When to use this quote
- dating
- conflict resolution
- creative writing
Key Concepts
personal boundaries
emotional tension
physical reaction
Questions to Reflect On
- How does sensory detail affect emotional impact?
- When is explicitness appropriate?
A Different Perspective
The graphic description may alienate some readers.
