Hand holding Quote by Anita Clenney
““Faelan stuffed his mouth with the granola bar like a starving toddler and moved down the aisle with the loaded cart. Bree grabbed an empty one and squeaked back. She rounded the corner and stopped. Faelan wasn't chewing. That was a good sign. The package he was reading wasn't. He glanced up, mouth parted, eyes dark, and the hand holding the box of extra large condoms darted behind his back.””
About This Quote
Source Short story: "The Aisle Encounter", 2023
A tense scene where a character's hidden behavior is hinted at by a subtle cue, creating suspense.
In simple terms: Suspenseful moment reveals hidden tension.
Watch for small details that signal deeper motives.
Themes
Mood
Type
When to use this quote
- grocery store
- public setting
- narrative tension
Key Concepts
Questions to Reflect On
- What does the condom box symbolize?
- How do mundane settings amplify tension?
Subtle actions can change perception dramatically.