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Apology Quote by Alan Clark

“Give a civil servant a good case and he'll wreck it with clichés, bad punctuation, double negatives, and convoluted apology.” quote by Alan Clark
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“Give a civil servant a good case and he'll wreck it with clichés, bad punctuation, double negatives, and convoluted apology.”

Alan Clark

About This Quote

Even a well‑intentioned bureaucrat can ruin a solid argument by overloading it with jargon, errors, and unnecessary apologies.

In simple terms: Bureaucratic overcomplication

Key Takeaway

Clarity beats verbosity

Themes

bureaucracy communication language mistakes overcomplication

Mood

ironic critical wry

Type

observation satire

When to use this quote

  • drafting policy proposals
  • preparing reports
  • responding to criticism

Key Concepts

writing authority process

Practical Applications

  • editing documents
  • training staff on concise writing

Questions to Reflect On

  • How can we ensure clarity in official documents?
  • What habits lead to unnecessary complexity?
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