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“When I started writing short stories, I thought I was writing a novel. I had like 60 or 70 pages. And what I realized was that I don't write inner monologue. I don't want to talk about what somebody is thinking or feeling. I wanted to try to show it in an interesting way. And so what I realized…” quote by Shane Carruth
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“When I started writing short stories, I thought I was writing a novel. I had like 60 or 70 pages. And what I realized was that I don't write inner monologue. I don't want to talk about what somebody is thinking or feeling. I wanted to try to show it in an interesting way. And so what I realized was that I was really writing a screenplay.”

Shane Carruth

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This interpretation was drafted with AI assistance. It is one reading of the quote, not the author's own explanation.

He realized his short stories lacked inner monologue and felt more like screenplays, focusing on showing rather than telling.

In simple terms: He switched from novel style to visual storytelling.

Key Takeaway

Embrace showing over telling.

Themes

writing storytelling show-don't-tell screenplay creative process

Mood

reflective creative analytical

Type

literary instructional

When to use this quote

  • short story writing
  • screenplay development
  • creative workshops
  • editing sessions

Key Concepts

Narrative technique visual narrative characterization

Questions to Reflect On

  • How can you convey character thoughts without explicit monologue?
  • When does showing become confusing?
A Different Perspective

Screenplays also need internal depth; balance showing with inner thought.

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