In re-reading 'Presumed Innocent,' the one thing that…
“In re-reading 'Presumed Innocent,' the one thing that struck me - and I re-read the book four different times in writing 'Innocent,' interested in different things each time - but I did think there were a couple of extra loops in the plot that I probably didn't need. The other thing that sort of amazed me was how discursive the book was.”
About This Quote
This interpretation was drafted with AI assistance. It is one reading of the quote, not the author's own explanation.
The novel’s complex plot contains unnecessary loops and a highly discursive style, reflecting the author’s deep engagement with the material.
In simple terms: The story is overly tangled and wordy.
Trim excess plot and tighten prose.
Themes
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Type
When to use this quote
- editing a novel
- writing workshops
- literary analysis
- teaching narrative craft
Key Concepts
Questions to Reflect On
- How can you balance depth with simplicity?
- When does detail become distraction?
Complexity can obscure clarity and hinder reader engagement.