The most basic definition of a story is 'Somebody wants…
“The most basic definition of a story is 'Somebody wants something and something's in his way,' and I'm more likely to be engaged if I at least think I know what those two 'somethings' are. They can be simple, they can be complex, but - particularly if you're a beginning writer - I'd rather you err on the side of revealing too much than too little.”
About This Quote
This interpretation was drafted with AI assistance. It is one reading of the quote, not the author's own explanation.
A story works when a character has a clear goal and an obstacle, and the audience can anticipate both.
In simple terms: Stories need a goal and a barrier.
Key Takeaway
Give readers enough clues to stay engaged.
Themes
storytelling
conflict
character
engagement
Mood
curious
analytical
creative
Type
advice
instructional
reflective
When to use this quote
- novel writing
- screenwriting
- game design
- marketing pitches
- teaching storytelling
Key Concepts
Narrative structure
goal‑obstacle dynamic
information balance
Questions to Reflect On
- How much detail is enough to keep tension?
- When does revealing too much spoil surprise?
A Different Perspective
Too much detail can slow pacing and reduce mystery.