A sentence begins quite simply, then it undulates and…
“A sentence begins quite simply, then it undulates and expands, parentheses intervene like quick-set hedges, the flowers of comparison bloom, and three fields off, like a wounded partridge, crouches the principal verb, making one wonder as one picks it up, poor little thing, whether after all it was worth such a tramp, so many guns, and such expensive dogs, and what, after all, is its relation to the main subject, potted so gaily half a page back, and proving finally to have been in the accusative case.”
About This Quote
This interpretation was drafted with AI assistance. It is one reading of the quote, not the author's own explanation.
The sentence is overly complex, with many digressions that obscure its main point and grammatical role.
In simple terms: Complex sentence hides its main idea.
Simplify sentences for clarity.
Themes
Mood
Type
When to use this quote
- academic writing
- editing
- teaching
- literary analysis
- proofreading
Key Concepts
Questions to Reflect On
- How can you balance richness and readability?
- When is complexity appropriate?
Complexity can be intentional for artistic effect.