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“If the passage absolutely demands cursing, be moderate. A little of it goes a long way. I've seen beginning writers pepper curse words through sentence after sentence. 'If you don't -blanking- get your -blanking-blank-blank- in to this house this -blanking- minute, I'm going to -blank- your…” quote by David Morrell
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““If the passage absolutely demands cursing, be moderate. A little of it goes a long way. I've seen beginning writers pepper curse words through sentence after sentence. 'If you don't -blanking- get your -blanking-blank-blank- in to this house this -blanking- minute, I'm going to -blank- your -blank- and nail it to the -blanking- door.' Two things happen when I read this junk: I get bored and I get angry. I didn't pick up your book to read garbage. If this is as clever as you can be, I don't want to read your prose. In life if you met someone who spoke like this, you'd want to flee. Then why put this stuff on the page? As near as I can determine, this abomination occurs because a writer is corrupted by the awful -blanking- dialog that movies inflict on us these days. It's also a sign of insecurity. The writer wonders if the dialog is strong enough and decides a lot of -blanking-blank- will do the trick. Someone might object that this kind of dialog is realistic in certain situations--intense scenes involving policemen or soldiers for example. I can only reply that in my research I spend considerable time with policemen and soldiers. Few of them curse any more than a normal person would. This garbage isn't realistic. It merely draws attention to itself and holds back the story. Use it sparingly.””

David Morrell

About This Quote

This interpretation was drafted with AI assistance. It is one reading of the quote, not the author's own explanation.

Excessive profanity in dialogue distracts readers and signals writer insecurity; moderation preserves impact and realism.

In simple terms: Too much swearing hurts storytelling.

Key Takeaway

Use curse words sparingly for effect.

Themes

writing dialogue authenticity reader engagement

Mood

critical reflective

Type

advice literary

When to use this quote

  • novels
  • screenplays
  • character monologues
  • intense scenes
  • editing drafts

Key Concepts

literary style character voice tone management

Questions to Reflect On

  • How can you convey intensity without profanity?
  • When is profanity essential to character?
A Different Perspective

Overuse can alienate audiences and feel forced.

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