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“I confess to wincing every so often at a poorly chosen word, a mangled sentence, an expression of emotion that seems indulgent or overly practiced. I have the urge to cut the book by fifty pages or so, possessed as I am with a keener appreciation for brevity.” quote by Barack Obama
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“I confess to wincing every so often at a poorly chosen word, a mangled sentence, an expression of emotion that seems indulgent or overly practiced. I have the urge to cut the book by fifty pages or so, possessed as I am with a keener appreciation for brevity.”

Barack Obama

About This Quote

This interpretation was drafted with AI assistance. It is one reading of the quote, not the author's own explanation.

Poor word choices betray a desire for brevity; edit ruthlessly.

In simple terms: Bad phrasing shows lack of conciseness.

Key Takeaway

Edit for clarity and brevity.

Themes

writing editing brevity

Mood

reflective analytical

Type

instructional practical

When to use this quote

  • academic papers
  • journalism
  • creative writing

Key Concepts

communication literary craft

Questions to Reflect On

  • How do you balance brevity and voice?
  • What editing habits improve your work?
A Different Perspective

Over‑editing may strip voice.

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