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... [In 'Pride and Prejudice'] Mr Collins's repulsiveness…

“... [In 'Pride and Prejudice'] Mr Collins's repulsiveness in his letter [about Lydia's elopement] does not exist only at the level of the sentence: it permeates all aspects of his rhetoric. Austen's point is that the well-formed sentence belongs to a self-enclosed mind, incapable of sympathetic…” quote by Andrew Elfenbein
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““... [In 'Pride and Prejudice'] Mr Collins's repulsiveness in his letter [about Lydia's elopement] does not exist only at the level of the sentence: it permeates all aspects of his rhetoric. Austen's point is that the well-formed sentence belongs to a self-enclosed mind, incapable of sympathetic connections with others and eager to inflict as much pain as is compatible with a thin veneer of politeness. Whereas Blair judged the Addisonian sentence as a completely autonomous unit, Austen judges the sentence as the product of a pre-existing moral agent. What counts is the sentence's ability to reveal that agent, not to enshrine a free-standing morsel of truth. Mr Darcy's letter to Elizabeth, in contrast, features a quite different practice of the sentence, including an odd form of punctation ... The dashes in Mr Darcy's letter transform the typographical sentence by physically making each sentence continuous with the next one. ... The dashes insist that each sentence is not self-sufficient but belongs to a larger macrostructure. Most of Mr Darcy's justification consists not of organised arguments like those of Mr Collins but of narrative. ... The letter's totality exists not in the typographical sentence but in the described event.””

Andrew Elfenbein

About This Quote

This interpretation was drafted with AI assistance. It is one reading of the quote, not the author's own explanation.

Austen contrasts Mr. Collins's rigid, self‑contained sentences with Mr. Darcy's fluid, narrative‑driven letters, showing how style reveals moral character.

In simple terms: Sentence style shows character's morality.

Key Takeaway

Notice how language reflects inner values.

Themes

literature style character morality communication

Mood

analytical thoughtful

Type

critical interpretive

When to use this quote

  • reading analysis
  • writing workshops
  • character studies
  • literary criticism

Key Concepts

narrative voice rhetoric ethical perception

Questions to Reflect On

  • What does a writer's style reveal about them?
  • How can punctuation shape meaning?
A Different Perspective

Rigid sentences may oversimplify complex motives.

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