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Behave Quote by Stefan Merrill Block

“I think that I write much more naturally about characters in solitude than characters interacting with others. My natural inclination - and one that I've learned to push against - is to give primacy to a character's interior world. Over the three books that I've written, I've had to teach myself…” quote by Stefan Merrill Block
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“I think that I write much more naturally about characters in solitude than characters interacting with others. My natural inclination - and one that I've learned to push against - is to give primacy to a character's interior world. Over the three books that I've written, I've had to teach myself that not every feeling needs to be described and that often the most impactful writing more elegantly evokes those unnamed feelings through the way characters speak and behave.”

Stefan Merrill Block

About This Quote

Source Interview: Author Talk, 2021

Writing should balance interior monologue with external action; not all feelings need explicit description.

In simple terms: Show, don’t tell emotions through behavior.

Key Takeaway

Use subtle cues to convey inner states.

Themes

writing technique character development show don’t tell

Mood

analytical creative

Type

craft instructional

When to use this quote

  • novel drafting
  • editing workshops
  • character workshops

Key Concepts

psychology narrative pacing

Questions to Reflect On

  • How can you reveal a character’s inner world without exposition?
  • When is explicit description necessary?
A Different Perspective

Overemphasis on subtlety may confuse readers.

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