Conceit Quote by Sidney Lanier
“I have frequently noticed in myself a tendency to a diffuse style; a disposition to push my metaphors too far, employing a multitude of words to heighten the patness of the image, and so making of it a conceit rather than a metaphor, a fault copiously illustrated in the poetry of Cowley, Waller, Donne, and others of that ilk.”
About This Quote
Source Essay: Poetry Critique, 1885
He notes his tendency to over‑extend metaphors, turning them into conceits.
In simple terms: He over‑uses metaphors, making them conceits.
Simplify poetic language.
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When to use this quote
- creative writing workshops
- editing
- literary analysis
Key Concepts
Questions to Reflect On
- When does a metaphor become a conceit?
- How to balance richness and clarity?
Complex language can obscure meaning.