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Tell Quote by Mark O'Brien

“When should you show more than tell? Great writing is balanced! You do not want to be a show-all, or a tell-all. And remember we are storytellers. Balance is the key! And let your ear be the guide. Is it too heavy, or too light? Or is it just right?” quote by Mark O'Brien
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““When should you show more than tell? Great writing is balanced! You do not want to be a show-all, or a tell-all. And remember we are storytellers. Balance is the key! And let your ear be the guide. Is it too heavy, or too light? Or is it just right?””

Mark O'Brien

About This Quote

Effective storytelling requires a balance between showing details and telling information, letting intuition guide pacing and intensity.

In simple terms: Balance showing and telling for engaging stories.

Key Takeaway

Find the right mix of detail and summary.

Themes

writing storytelling balance tone intuition

Mood

thoughtful instructive

Type

advice instructional

When to use this quote

  • novel writing
  • screenplay
  • teaching writing
  • editing

Key Concepts

show vs tell narrative pacing reader engagement

Questions to Reflect On

  • How do you decide when to show or tell?
  • What cues tell you the pacing is off?
A Different Perspective

Too much description can overwhelm; too little can confuse.

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