Character Quote by John Sayles
“To this day, I get rewrite offers where they say: 'We feel this script needs work with character, dialogue, plot and tone,' and when you ask what's left, they say: 'Well, the typing is very good.'”
About This Quote
Script feedback often praises technical writing while criticizing deeper elements, highlighting a disconnect between form and substance.
In simple terms: Good writing isn’t enough without strong story.
Balance craft with character and plot.
Themes
Mood
Type
When to use this quote
- film development
- script revision
- producer notes
Key Concepts
Questions to Reflect On
- What aspects of a script need deeper development?
- How can you improve character depth?
Technical polish can mask narrative flaws.