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““The opening sentence alone contained thirty-six words—monstrous””

James A. Michener

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Source Book: Texas, James A. Michener, 1985

The opening line is excessively long, making it feel overwhelming and unwieldy.

In simple terms: A sentence with too many words feels clumsy.

Key Takeaway

Trim sentences for clarity.

Themes

writing editing clarity

Mood

analytical critical

Type

educational advice

When to use this quote

  • novel drafting
  • academic papers
  • journalism
  • public speaking

Key Concepts

sentence structure conciseness

Questions to Reflect On

  • How can you convey the same idea with fewer words?
  • When does a long sentence serve a purpose?
A Different Perspective

Long sentences can obscure meaning and lose reader interest.

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