Language Quote by James A. Michener
““The opening sentence alone contained thirty-six words—monstrous””
About This Quote
Source Book: Texas, James A. Michener, 1985
The opening line is excessively long, making it feel overwhelming and unwieldy.
In simple terms: A sentence with too many words feels clumsy.
Trim sentences for clarity.
Themes
Mood
Type
When to use this quote
- novel drafting
- academic papers
- journalism
- public speaking
Key Concepts
Questions to Reflect On
- How can you convey the same idea with fewer words?
- When does a long sentence serve a purpose?
Long sentences can obscure meaning and lose reader interest.