Been Quote by Colm Toibin
“Describe character using dialogue. Describe character using what the characters see or do or think, but not what they had done or where they had been.”
About This Quote
Character should be revealed through actions, perceptions, and thoughts rather than past deeds.
In simple terms: Show characters by what they see, do, and think.
Key Takeaway
Use present behavior to define personality.
Themes
characterization
show,
perception
Mood
analytical
creative
Type
literary
instructional
When to use this quote
- writing workshops
- novel drafting
- screenplay development
- role‑playing games
Key Concepts
psychology
narrative technique
subjectivity
Questions to Reflect On
- What does a character notice in a room?
- How do they react internally to a surprise?
A Different Perspective
Readers may still infer backstory unintentionally.
