Language Quote by Charles M. Fox
““This sentence is filled with unnecessary words, phrases and rhetorical throat-clearing devices and is marked by a generally bombastic tone.””
About This Quote
Source Essay: On Writing Style, 2003
Excessive words and rhetorical flourishes create a bombastic tone that obscures meaning.
In simple terms: Wordiness creates bombastic tone.
Write concisely.
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Type
When to use this quote
- editing
- academic writing
- public speaking
- content creation
Key Concepts
Questions to Reflect On
- Which words are unnecessary?
- How can you balance clarity and flair?
May undervalue expressive language.