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““This sentence is filled with unnecessary words, phrases and rhetorical throat-clearing devices and is marked by a generally bombastic tone.””

Charles M. Fox

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Source Essay: On Writing Style, 2003

Excessive words and rhetorical flourishes create a bombastic tone that obscures meaning.

In simple terms: Wordiness creates bombastic tone.

Key Takeaway

Write concisely.

Themes

style clarity verbosity communication

Mood

analytical critical

Type

educational technical

When to use this quote

  • editing
  • academic writing
  • public speaking
  • content creation

Key Concepts

Rhetoric linguistics

Questions to Reflect On

  • Which words are unnecessary?
  • How can you balance clarity and flair?
A Different Perspective

May undervalue expressive language.

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