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“I have frequently noticed in myself a tendency to a diffuse style; a disposition to push my metaphors too far, employing a multitude of words to heighten the patness of the image, and so making of it a conceit rather than a metaphor, a fault copiously illustrated in the poetry of Cowley, Waller…” quote by Sidney Lanier
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“I have frequently noticed in myself a tendency to a diffuse style; a disposition to push my metaphors too far, employing a multitude of words to heighten the patness of the image, and so making of it a conceit rather than a metaphor, a fault copiously illustrated in the poetry of Cowley, Waller, Donne, and others of that ilk.”

Sidney Lanier

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This interpretation was drafted with AI assistance. It is one reading of the quote, not the author's own explanation.

He notes his tendency to over‑extend metaphors, turning them into conceits.

In simple terms: He over‑uses metaphors, making them conceits.

Key Takeaway

Simplify poetic language.

Themes

writing poetry style

Mood

critical introspective

Type

analytical educational

When to use this quote

  • creative writing workshops
  • editing
  • literary analysis

Key Concepts

metaphor conceit literary criticism

Questions to Reflect On

  • When does a metaphor become a conceit?
  • How to balance richness and clarity?
A Different Perspective

Complex language can obscure meaning.

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