What is the character trying to say? Why? Be as specific…
“What is the character trying to say? Why? Be as specific as you can, using sense images that evoke something about the character. Try using the character's senses, even if the character is you.”
About This Quote
This interpretation was drafted with AI assistance. It is one reading of the quote, not the author's own explanation.
Use sensory details to reveal a character’s inner state, making their motives clear to the reader.
In simple terms: Show, don’t tell, using senses.
Write with vivid sensory imagery.
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When to use this quote
- novel writing
- screenwriting
- character sketches
- role‑play exercises
Key Concepts
Questions to Reflect On
- What senses best reflect this character’s conflict?
- How can sensory cues deepen empathy?
May become overly descriptive, losing plot focus.