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There's an old adage in writing: 'Don't tell, but show.'…

“There's an old adage in writing: 'Don't tell, but show.' Writing is not psychology. We do not talk 'about' feelings. Instead the writer feels and through her words awakens those feelings in the reader. The writer takes the reader's hand and guides him through the valley of sorrow and joy without…” quote by Natalie Goldberg
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“There's an old adage in writing: 'Don't tell, but show.' Writing is not psychology. We do not talk 'about' feelings. Instead the writer feels and through her words awakens those feelings in the reader. The writer takes the reader's hand and guides him through the valley of sorrow and joy without ever having to mention those words.”

Natalie Goldberg

About This Quote

This interpretation was drafted with AI assistance. It is one reading of the quote, not the author's own explanation.

Show, don’t tell; convey emotions through sensory detail rather than explicit description.

In simple terms: Use vivid scenes to evoke feelings.

Key Takeaway

Write scenes, not explanations.

Themes

writing emotion show-don’t-tell

Mood

introspective instructive

Type

educational inspirational

When to use this quote

  • novel writing
  • screenwriting
  • teaching creative writing

Key Concepts

narrative technique empathy sensory detail

Questions to Reflect On

  • How can you translate an emotion into a concrete image?
  • What details best hint at a character’s inner state?
A Different Perspective

May lose subtlety if over‑showing.

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