Sometimes language gets in the way of the story's…
“Sometimes language gets in the way of the story's feelings. The reader finds himself experiencing the language of the story rather than the story. The words sit there on the page like coins, with their own opacity, as though they're there for their own sake. "A man goes into a phone booth, stirring coins in his palm." "Stirring" is such an obviously selected word. You can feel the writer looking for the word as he sat at the typewriter.”
About This Quote
This interpretation was drafted with AI assistance. It is one reading of the quote, not the author's own explanation.
He argues that overly conscious language can distract readers from the story’s emotional core.
In simple terms: Style can block story feeling.
Key Takeaway
Balance craft with emotional flow.
Themes
writing
style
reader experience
Mood
reflective
critical
Type
literary
educational
When to use this quote
- novel writing
- editing
- creative workshops
Key Concepts
metafiction
narrative technique
Questions to Reflect On
- How do you know when language serves the story?
- When is stylistic flourish appropriate?
A Different Perspective
Focusing too much on word choice may alienate readers.