[Referring to passage by Alice Munro] Finally, the passage…
![“[Referring to passage by Alice Munro] Finally, the passage contradicts a form of bad advice often given young writers -- namely, that the job of the author is to show, not tell. Needless to say, many great novelists combine "dramatic" showing with long sections of the flat-out authorial narration…” quote by Francine Prose](https://sms4smile.com/q/i/4fb/francine-prose-9354_bad-advice_referring-to-passage-by-alice-munro-fina_1081030.jpg)
““[Referring to passage by Alice Munro] Finally, the passage contradicts a form of bad advice often given young writers -- namely, that the job of the author is to show, not tell. Needless to say, many great novelists combine "dramatic" showing with long sections of the flat-out authorial narration that is, I guess, what is meant by telling. And the warning against telling leads to a confusion that causes novice writers to think that everything should be acted out -- don't tell us a character is happy, show us how she screams "yay" and jumps up and down for joy -- when in fact the responsibility of showing should be assumed by the energetic and specific use of language.””
About This Quote
This interpretation was drafted with AI assistance. It is one reading of the quote, not the author's own explanation.
Balancing vivid, energetic language with occasional narration enriches storytelling beyond strict “show, don” rules.
In simple terms: Use lively language, not just actions, to convey feelings.
Key Takeaway
Blend showing and telling for depth.
Themes
writing
technique
balance
Mood
thoughtful
analytical
Type
instructional
reflective
When to use this quote
- novel drafting
- character development
- creative workshops
Key Concepts
show‑don’t‑tell
narrative voice
language energy
Questions to Reflect On
- How can you decide when to show versus tell?
- What language choices make a scene vivid?
A Different Perspective
Overemphasis on showing can neglect useful exposition.