Like all his attempts at fiction it would be as personal…
““Like all his attempts at fiction it would be as personal as a letter—painful to those who knew him, of no interest to those who didn’t; precious or self-pitying in spots, in others too clever for its own good; so packed with Shakespeare that it looked as if he worked with a concordance in his lap; so narcissistic that its final effect would be that of the mirrored room which gives back the same image times without count, or the old Post Toastie box of his boyhood with the fascinating picture of a woman and child holding a Post Toastie box with a picture of a woman and child holding a Post Toastie box with a picture of a woman and child holding—-””
About This Quote
This interpretation was drafted with AI assistance. It is one reading of the quote, not the author's own explanation.
Critiquing a self‑indulgent, overly literary style that mirrors the author's own narcissism, making it inaccessible.
In simple terms: Overly literary, self‑absorbed writing alienates readers.
Avoid self‑indulgence in prose.
Themes
Mood
Type
When to use this quote
- creative writing
- literary criticism
- publishing
Key Concepts
Questions to Reflect On
- Do you prioritize style over clarity?
- How does ego affect storytelling?
Complexity can obscure meaning.